Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2015/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 12:02, 9 February 2021 (UTC)

One of your two Eurovision nominees, so I will help axe this from the queue! --K. Peake 12:02, 9 February 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "represented San Marino in the Junior Eurovision Song Contest." → "represented San Marino in the Junior Eurovision Song Contest on separate occasions."
 * "The 2015 entry was" → "The 2015 entry in the Eurovision Song Contest was" to be specific
 * "in Moscow, and a contest on social media" → "in Moscow and a contest on social media" with the wikilink

Background

 * Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest
 * "Their debut entry" → "The nation's debut entry"
 * "failed to qualify to the final" → "failed to qualify for the [[San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2008#Grand final|grand final" with the target
 * Target semi-final to Eurovision Song Contest 2008 to lead to the one the country competed in
 * "the final." → "the grand final." with the target
 * "Between 2012 and 2014," → "From 2012 to 2014,"
 * Add a source for Jürgens' years or reword to mentioning them being in the 1960s
 * "to the final," → "for the grand final;"
 * "to bring San Marino" → "to bring the nation"
 * "that the nation would" → "that San Marino would"

Internal selection

 * Img looks good!
 * "at SMRTV's studios." → "at the broadcaster's studios."
 * "while Simoncini represented" → "while Simoncini had represented"
 * Lowercase the Peppermints per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * "when she turned sixteen." → "when she turned 16." per MOS:NUM
 * "had composed twenty-three" → "had composed 23" but this sentence is not sourced
 * "Seventeen of those entries were written together with Meinunger." → "17 of those entries were written together with Bernd Meinunger."
 * "for the contest," → "for the Eurovision Song Contest,"
 * "These adaptations included..." this sentence is not sourced

Promotion

 * "on 16 March." → "on 16 March 2015."
 * "organization MEI, and record label" → "organization MEI and record label" with the wikilink
 * "The duo also embarked" → "Simoncini and Perniola also embarked"

At Eurovision

 * Target Eurovision Rules to Rules of the Eurovision Song Contest
 * Target Big Five to Big Five (Eurovision) per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "are required to" → "were required to"
 * "the top ten countries" → "the top 10 countries" per MOS:NUM
 * "with countries with favourable voting histories" where is this part sourced?
 * Target second semi-final to Eurovision Song Contest 2015
 * Remove target on Radio San Marino
 * Replace wikilink and introduction on Monetta, as we already know what entries she performed
 * "during the final." → "during the grand final."

Semi-final

 * Img looks good!
 * "Anita Simoncini and Michele Perniola took part" → "Simoncini and Perniola took part"
 * "20 and 21 May." → "20 and 21 May 2015."
 * Wikilink Antonello Carozza
 * "in a white dress shirt," → "in a white shirt,"
 * "that becomes covered" → "that became covered"
 * "failed to qualify to" → "failed to qualify for"
 * "among the top ten nations." → "among the top 10 nations." per MOS:NUM

Voting

 * The second sentence does not appear to be sourced
 * "This jury was" are you sure it was only them and not all of the jury?
 * "and that the" → "and how the"
 * [36] should be solely at the end of the para since it is used for the last two sentences
 * "and grand final" → "and the grand final"
 * "San Marino scored six" → "the nation scored six"
 * "in the second semi-final and grand final of the contest," → "in the contest's second semi-final and grand final, respectively,"

Points awarded to San Marino

 * Good

Points awarded by San Marino

 * Good

Detailed jury voting results

 * There should not be two dashes after Barbara Andreini
 * No sources are provided for the tables below

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, but I found original research to be the most prominent one here. --K. Peake 21:45, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Should be all set now, but just note that it's not original research if the sources are just unclear! Thanks for reviewing! Grk1011 (talk) 18:17, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I do understand the difference but thank you for recognising potential confusion, though where is the second sentence of the voting sub-section backed up? --K. Peake 18:18, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
 * It is in the source provided for that section, specifically for those 3 claims it reads:
 * Since last year, the European Broadcasting Union announces the list of national jury members in advance.
 * Members of the jury must pursue a profession in or related to the music industry;
 * Members of the jury shall be citizens of the country they represent;
 * If you're concerned about the "five", I can move up the source from the next section? Hope this helps. Grk1011 (talk) 18:29, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes that is what I am concerned about, please invoke the source using a refname. --K. Peake 19:37, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
 * All set! Grk1011 (talk) 19:44, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅, apologies if this took a while longer than your previous GANs due to the confusion over the ref! --K. Peake 19:55, 10 February 2021 (UTC)