Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2017/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 12:56, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

I will review this soon; hopefully you will succeed in promoting this GT ultimately! --K. Peake 12:56, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
✅ except the last one. There is a bit of a disagreement about how we want to refer to it. I'll update it to whatever term is decided when that happens. Grk1011 (talk) 15:09, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Wikilink Ralph Siegel in the infobox
 * Swap the order of the other two songwriters per the body
 * "and the completion of a tour that included a stops in" → "and promotional performances in" per the body
 * "San Marino performed tenth" → "San Marino performed 10th" per MOS:NUM
 * Shouldn't the Eurovision Song Contest final sub-section be retitled to grand final like most have been and then you fix the pipe accordingly?
 * It is best not to update it until the discussion is resolved, to avoid stability issues. --K. Peake 15:55, 14 March 2021 (UTC)

Background
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 * You should add a comma after "next two entries" and one after 2016 for correct separation
 * "San Marino was included on the European Broadcasting Union's (EBU) list" → "the European Broadcasting Union (EBU) included San Marino on their list"

Internal selection
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 * Pipe SMRTV to San Marino RTV on the img text
 * "On 7 March 2017, SMRTV Director General" → "On 7 March 2017, Radiotelevisione della Repubblica di San Marino (SMRTV) director general" with the pipe
 * Unless I missed something in the wording, the studios part is not sourced
 * Pipe 2012, 2013 and 2014 to their respective Eurovision articles
 * "2012 through 2015." → "2012 through to 2015."
 * The first sentence of SMRTV's response does not appear to be properly sourced
 * "to represent that nation;" → "to represent the nation;"

Promotion
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 * "were filmed by" → "was filmed by"
 * "on 24 March" → "on 24 March 2017"
 * "where they performed" → "where they performed the song"
 * "On 8 April, they performed during the ninth edition" → "On 8 April 2017, the two performed during the ninth annual edition"
 * Remove wikilink on Spain

At Eurovision
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 * "at International Exhibition Centre" → "at the International Exhibition Centre"
 * Remember my earlier comment about the grand final pipe, if it is fully relevant
 * Even though the countries not needing to qualify is sourced, that being part of the Eurovision Rules is not
 * "The European Broadcasting Union (EBU) split up" → "The EBU split up"
 * The favourable voting histories part is not sourced
 * Pipe second semi final to Eurovision Song Contest 2017
 * "on 13 April" → "on 13 April 2017"
 * The Radio San Marino broadcast is not sourced

Semi-final
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 * Img looks good!
 * "in dress rehearsals on" → "in respective dress rehearsals on"
 * "on 10 May," → "on 10 May 2017,"
 * Monetta's outfit is sourced as black and white, but Wilson's is only sourced as black so reword accordingly
 * The chandelier is unsourced
 * Last para looks good!

Voting
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 * Whole sub-section looks good apart from Fabrizio Raggi appearing not to be sourced as a chairperson, unless that's what Juror A indicates?

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; neat article like your previous ones, though! --K. Peake 17:48, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I believe I addressed all the issues you noted. Let me know if I missed anything! Grk1011 (talk) 23:34, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, you have implemented everything as far as I can see apart from the grand final point, but you have a valid reason not to! --K. Peake 07:38, 15 March 2021 (UTC)