Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2020/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:47, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

I will try to start this review tonight, depending on what's going on. --K. Peake 18:47, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
✅ with some minor wording changes. Grk1011 (talk) 01:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Infobox looks good!
 * Surround "Freaky!" with double speech marks
 * The second time in 11 years part is not mentioned in the body
 * Pipe final to Eurovision Song Contest 2008
 * "Due to the 2020 coronavirus pandemic in Europe," → "Due to the coronavirus pandemic in Europe during 2020," with the pipe
 * "subsequently took part in" → "was subsequently an entry for" because the song itself doesn't take part
 * "during Eurovision: Europe Shine a Light that" → "during the former of the three that"

Background
✅ Grk1011 (talk) 01:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "ten times since their" → "10 times since their" per MOS:NUM
 * "The nation's next four entries" → "The nation's next four entries,"
 * "by Jessika feat." → "by Jessika featuring"
 * "for did not" → "for, did not"
 * "best placing to this point" → "best placing up to 2020" per this being a while after the opening sentence
 * Pipe grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2019
 * "SMRTV Director General" → "San Marino RTV (SMRTV) Director General" with the wikilink
 * Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest 2020

Before Eurovision

 * Img looks good!

Digital Battle
✅ Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove Italian singer introduction to Senhit since it is clear she's the same person as Senit due to the pseudonym mention, plus remove the pipe here
 * Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2011
 * Remove pipe on "Stand By"
 * "for their preferred song." → "for the song."
 * [6] can remain in its first position but should be invoked second at the end of the para and not the penultimate sentence, due to backing the last two up
 * "Serhat, and Valentina Monetta and Jimmy Wilson," → "Serhat as well as Monetta and Wilson,"
 * Add (2019) in brackets rather than writing from 2019
 * "reported that it received" → "reported that the contest received" because otherwise it sounds like you are talking about the song
 * The table info should be written out in prose probably around this point, as two results is not enough to warrant a table
 * "for the year's participation." → "for the nation's participation in the 2020 contest."

At Eurovision
✅ Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "on 12 and 14 May," → "on 12 and 14 May, respectively,"
 * "the top ten countries from" → "the top 10 countries from" per MOS:NUM
 * "The EBU announced soon after" → "The European Broadcasting Union (EBU) announced thereafter" with the wikilink
 * "that were to" → "that were set to"

Alternative song contests
✅ Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "of ten singers" → "of 10 singers"
 * "represented Austria at Eurovision" → "represented Austria in the Eurovision Song Contest"
 * "on 14 April," → "on 14 April 2020,"

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 08:32, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I believe I addressed all of your concerns! Let me know if I missed anything. Regarding a potential WP:GT, in your experience, would I be able to submit this grouping, omitting the ongoing 2021 article or would I have to wait until May/June for that to become a GA? This topic will have yearly additions, so I just wonder if there are only certain windows of time where nominations would be successful because of that. Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now and regarding a potential GT, you can nominate it before the 2021 contest like I did with Kanye West's studio albums even though Donda is pending release. However, you can use GT addition to add the 2021 contest when it becomes a GA for stopping the topic being demoted. --K. Peake 14:33, 29 March 2021 (UTC)