Talk:Sanctified (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DepressedPer (talk · contribs) 06:16, 11 July 2014 (UTC)

I'll be taking the position of reviewing this article. It'll take awhile so be patient.


 * Lead
 * Written well and explains the whole article.


 * Background
 * Remove the first name from "Then after Rick Ross' sixth studio album..." and "Rick Ross stated that the song...". The former should read "Then, after Ross' sixth studio album...".
 * ✅ STATic message me!   16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Recording
 * The quote is integrated well.


 * Composition and recording
 * "...sample of singer Betty Wright that Kanye West attempted...", remove "Kanye", no need to repeat the whole name twice in the same section.
 * "In the song Kanye West raps about...", replace "Kanye" with a comma in front of song.
 * Section ✅ STATic message me!   16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * The DJBooth review ref. needs the writer doing the review, not the artist and its web link.
 * The AllHipHop sentence should be rewritten like "Kellin Miller of AllHipHop stated that it...".
 * The LA Times, EW and Consequence of Sound refs list the song as the album's best tracks. The LA Times gives a little review about the song, the other two refs. you can remove them.
 * "NME's Peter Cashmore said that..." should be rewritten as "Peter Cashmore of NME said that...".
 * The first three sentences should be condensed to two.
 * Does it look good to you now? STATic message me!   16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)


 * References
 * Refs. 1, 22 and 23 need date of the link.
 * Refs. 10, 12, 15, 17, 18, 22 and 23 need writer's name from the link.
 * Refs. 2, 19 and 20: Remove the "By" in the author line.
 * Ref24 needs inline citation.
 * Refs. 28 and 30 have accessdate tags that are different from the rest. Change them.
 * Ref7: Los Angeles Times' publisher is Tribune Company.
 * Ref17: Nme.com should be NME; the publisher is IPC Media.
 * Ref20: The Boston Globe's publisher is John W. Henry.
 * Section done ✅ STATic message me!   16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)

There's an image for the single floating around the internet that would be useful but other than that, this looks to be on its way of being a GA. DepressedPer (talk) 10:38, 12 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review man, I will be getting on all this shortly. As for the cover artwork, I believe there is no "official" cover, except for the solo Big Sean version, the ones for this version are fan-made. STATic message me!   15:14, 12 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I see. Okay, then that won't be needed. DepressedPer (talk) 15:21, 12 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Images of Rick Ross and Kanye West could help add to the article. DepressedPer (talk) 17:11, 12 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Makes perfect sense, I usually would have done that. It looks like everything is done and ready to go. If there is anything else let me know. STATic message me!   16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Made a few adjustments to the article; looks good to pass it as a GA. DepressedPer (talk) 17:20, 13 July 2014 (UTC)