Talk:Sandro Mamukelashvili/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:06, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Going to be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:06, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Wikilink points per game
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Early life and high school career

 * Wikilink Soviet national basketball team to Soviet Union women's national basketball team
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "He competed on the U17, U18 and U19 teams and helped to finish third place in the national finals." - helped whom?
 * The Teams. Clarified. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "and introduced him to several NBA players like Stephen Curry." - such as
 * Rephrased. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink NBA
 * Ok. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "He speaks English, Georgian, Russian, and Italian." - can be He is fluent in
 * Probably various levels of fluency, but changed. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

College career

 * Wiklink the first mention of the terms points, rebound and blocks to help non-Basketball readers
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "In the summer of 2019," - avoid mentioning seasons per MOS:SEASON
 * Changed to "Following his sophomore season." ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "while making 61% of his shots from the field and 60% from behind the arc." - should be percent per MOS:PERCENT
 * OK. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "but did not hire an agent." - Wikilink agent to Sports agent
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

National team career

 * "In the summer of 2018," - avoiding using seasons
 * Changed to "July 2018". ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Career statstics

 * The table of his college stats should be referenced to reliable sources
 * Cited to SportsReference. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Am going to place the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 17:14, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Have addressed your concerns. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 18:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 21 April 2020 (UTC)