Talk:Sanjay Dutt: The Crazy Untold Story of Bollywood's Bad Boy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yashthepunisher (talk · contribs) 13:22, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

I will review this. Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:22, 13 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Comments

Lead
 * is a 2018 Indian biography written by --> is a 2018 Indian biography book written by
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:41, 18 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Replace 'The book' with 'it' in the following sentence.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:41, 18 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Instead of mentioning that both were actors in the bracket, I'd suggest starting the sentence as, "The book chronicles his birth to actors Sunil Dutt and Nargis"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:41, 18 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Avoid using words like 'highly'. It's very POVish.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:41, 18 April 2021 (UTC)


 * forty-seven should be 47.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:41, 18 April 2021 (UTC)

Summary
 * eleven years --> 11 years
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:41, 18 April 2021 (UTC)


 * which earned him nominations for the Filmfare Award for Best Actor for his performances in both. --> both of which earned him nominations for the Filmfare Award for Best Actor.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:41, 18 April 2021 (UTC)

Development and writing
 * Link The Indian Express
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:41, 18 April 2021 (UTC)

Refs
 * Planet Bollywood is not a reliable source.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:41, 18 April 2021 (UTC)

That's it. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:08, 17 April 2021 (UTC)