Talk:Sanne Keizer/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 01:16, 14 May 2019 (UTC)

I'll review this one. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 01:16, 14 May 2019 (UTC)

Lead

 * After a four-year hiatus, Keizer returned to full-time competition now partnered with Meppelink.

Early life, education, and family

 * Not a big deal, but maybe call the section "Personal life"?
 * She was called to the junior national water polo team at some point (or state the year or her age at the time, if available)
 * she wanted to continue playing a ball game <<<=== I think "ball sport" is the more common term?
 * obtained a HBO diploma <<<=== obtained "an" HBO diploma

Career

 * The duo did not progress past the qualifying rounds in Hellas and in their next four events <<<=== "...or in their next..."
 * they fell short of their No. 6 seed to finish ninth ===>>> "and finished ninth"
 * 2011 was a breakthrough year for the pair ===>>> "The 2011 season" was a breakthrough year for the pair
 * they were temporarily setback ===>>> they were temporarily set back

Style of play

 * Is it possible to add a "Style of play" section like in your other GAs?

Career statistics

 * In the performance timeline, there should be a column titled 2014–17 to show the gap during her hiatus.

Overall

 * Everything looks sourced.
 * No bare refs.
 * No dab links.
 * All of the links work.
 * No plagiarism detected.

Overall, the article looks pretty solid. The biggest comment is to add a "style of play" section. Everything else is minor. Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 01:45, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. There shouldn't be a problem adding a style of play section, but I probably won't be able to work on this until this weekend. Bennv3771 (talk)
 * Sure, no problem! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:10, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed all the issues you raised. The only thing I left unchanged was the section title for "Early life, education, and family", which I prefer over "Personal life" as I think it some of the content it covers doesn't really fall under "personal". Let me know if there's anything I missed or if there are new issues to be addressed. Thanks again for the review. Bennv3771 (talk) 02:25, 19 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Looks good! I tweaked two things, and am passing the review! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 02:35, 19 May 2019 (UTC)