Talk:Santa Claus, Arizona/GA1

GA Review
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This article passes most of the criteria. I do have several qualms with this article though:


 * 1) ✅ All images are on the right, any chance you could move some to the left?
 * 2) ✅ "Establish in 1937" ? - Check please.
 * 3) ✅ "Within five years of 1937" ? - Rewording needed.
 * 4) ✅ "Santa Clause" or Santa Claus? Suntag comment The references generally use "Claus"
 * 5) ✅ "and through 1961 remailing service advertisements offering to postmark letters from Santa Claus, Arizona" - need to repeat Arizona?
 * 6) ✅ "In the 1930s, Los Angeles, California real estate woman Nina Talbot" - add an "a" there,
 * 7) ✅ Wikilink "rum pie"?
 * 8) ✅ Can reference 18 be turned into a footnote?
 * 9) Any chance that you can map out on an Arizona map approximately, where it was? Suntag comment - I posted reqmapin to the talk page and added a request at User:Seth_Ilys/Dot_Project
 * 10) The Geology section is shorter than the image in the section, is expansion possible? Suntag comment - I'll give a more detailed sarch of USGA.
 * 11) I am very disappointed in the idea that the almost the entire article is about its history. I am sure that there is more to this abandoned village than meets the eye. I really suggest putting some more research into other details. Suntag comment I'll look through the references used in the articles at Good_articles to see if I can locate additional source material.

For now, I am putting this article on hold for fourteen days rather than seven, because I believe that more deep research is needed. I really suggest doing it soon, meaning we won't have to wait 14 days. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 22:57, 23 December 2008 (UTC)


 * I am sorry about this. My major problems haven't really been solved, and to be truthful, I am going to fail this article. You can bring it to GAR or just renom when its ready. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 15:44, 17 January 2009 (UTC)