Talk:Santo Tomás, Sonora

I'm attempting to write a page about Santo Tomas, Sonora Mexico but wikipedia is saying that everything I've written sounds "too promotional."

Many of the sources are closely related to the Santo Tomas website only because the history of Santo Tomas is not found anywhere else. Almost everyone that knows of Santo Tomas knows by word of mouth so there is very little documented historical information.

Could anyone help me with the way that it is written or with suggestions for sources?Raeann empire (talk) 15:52, 25 April 2017 (UTC)