Talk:Sarah Cooper/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good.
 * Birthdate needs a source.
 * Here and in other sections, add a comma after "Sheets".
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:59, 19 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Here and in other sections, change "lip syncing" and "lip synced" to "lip-syncing" and "lip-synced".
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:59, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Early life and education

 * In the first reference, the Wayback Machine template isn't necessary or ideal to use since other references don't have it. May I suggest using " " this instead?
 * Add a comma after "College Park".
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:54, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Career

 * Remove the comma after "comedy in Atlanta".
 * "of self-help book" "of a self-help book"
 * Remove the commas after "performing on TikTok" and "economical political satire".
 * The Princess Bride should link to The Princess Bride (film).
 * All done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:51, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Publications

 * This section looks good.

Filmography

 * This section looks good.

Awards and nominations

 * This section looks good.