Talk:Sarah McNutt

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Peer Review

 * Strong lead section
 * The in-text links are good
 * The hospital is referred to as both Babies' Hospital and Babies Hospital
 * Missing some commas
 * Good organization of sections and use of sub-headings
 * Sources look good, but could probably include more
 * Good neutral tone
 * Is she still alive?
 * Should write "Born September 10, 1930" rather than "Birthdate-..."
 * Some sentences could be more concise

Peer Review
- Introduction is great - maybe combine first 2 sentences? - Include full name of Elizabeth Blackwell

- Medical societies: maybe add a sentence at the beginning for context, citations (just seems a little odd that the section includes a list and then a paragraph) - Works: include citation (and maybe some context of what journal) for each publication - Teaching: reorganize paragraph, make sure to give an overview first before diving into the specifics (mention all topics that she taught about, then give the details of it). - Pediatrics: Again, make sure the first sentence is more general. I think making each section stand alone will be helpful in case someone is only skimming the article or looking for something specific. Also, include the new name of hospital.

- Article is very well organized, has good sources, thorough. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anc12 (talk • contribs) 19:06, 30 March 2018 Anc12 (talk) 17:04, 9 April 2018 (UTC)Anna