Talk:Sarah Richards

Problems with article
I think I have fixed the problems with links and references. I still have a difficulty with the claim that it reads like an advertisement. I see no praise in my article. Can somebody please point out my mistakes. I must point out I do not know Sarah Richards and have never seen her work. Nor do I understand the problem with soap operas and television. Regards, Vaaljapie (talk) 09:52, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

I received no response. I have added further internet references. I think I am now entitled to remove the banner. Regards, Vaaljapie (talk) 06:59, 18 August 2016 (UTC)