Talk:Saskatchewan Highway 5/GA1

GA Review
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Comments:
 * 1) ✅ What is the purpose of two maps in the infobox?
 * 2) Are there shields for the roads Highway 5 intersects? will try to modify template at User:Pomte/Template:SK road shield for this...
 * 3) ✅ In first paragraph of lead, add comma after "Yellowhead"
 * 4) ✅ Make the third parapgraph of the lead an italicized note at the top of the page
 * 5) ✅ In first sentence of history, capitalize "river"
 * 6) ✅ In first sentence in second paragraph of history, add comma after "Route"
 * 7) ✅ In next sentence, change "an" to "a"
 * 8) "a dirt to gravel to all weather road" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
 * 9) ✅ The sentence "In 1925, access from Saskatoon to Provincial Highway 5 was via Provincial Highway 12 due north of Saskatoon connecting with Highway 5 west of Warman or via Provincial Highway 27 which traveled east and north from Saskatoon connecting at Aberdeen" sounds unclear.
 * 10) ✅ "north south" should be hyphenated
 * 11) "became retitled? sounds awkward
 * 12) ✅ Try to combine some of the short sentences in the Communities section
 * 13) ✅ "down town" should be one word
 * 14) ✅ "at the Saskatoon Transit"? sounds awkward
 * 15) ✅ In the sentence "The Highway 5 - Highway 35 junction features historical plaque which commemorates the Touchwood Hills Hudson Bay Company fur trade post established in 1879." add "a" between features and historical
 * 16) ✅ Fix spelling of "Hw 755"
 * 17) What kind of museums are in Sturgis and Preeceville?
 * 18) ✅ "is hosted at Verigin" sounds awkward, Try rephrasing
 * 19) In first sentence of Geophysical features section, add comma after "Saskatchewan"
 * 20) ✅ Make sure to use present tense when describing the current aspects of the route, do not use "travel will be through"
 * 21) Clarify what an ecoregion is, possibly by adding a wikilink
 * 22) ✅ "re-opened" should not be hyphenated
 * 23) In second paragraph of Geophysical features section, what are Watson and Wadena?
 * 24) ✅ Hyphenate "three lake"
 * 25) Replace opening brace with parentheses
 * 26) ✅ In Highway economy section, replace "agricultural" with "agriculture"
 * 27) ✅ In first sentence of second paragraph of Highway configuration section, add comma after "Kamsack"
 * 28) ✅ In next paragraoh, "directions" should be singular
 * 29) ✅ In Upgrades section, remove comma after 2008
 * 30) ✅ Can you make the second paragraph of the Upgrades section more clear by rewording?
 * 31) ✅ In first section of third paragraph of upgrades section, change "a" to "an"
 * 32) ✅ Fix redlink to correspond to wikilink to Ministry of Highways and Infrastructure (Saskatchewan)
 * 33) ✅ "re-surface" should not be hyphenated
 * 34) Combine a lot of the short paragraphs in the Travel route section
 * 35) ✅ "Zig-zagging" sounds awkward; try using a different word
 * 36) Do you think you can make the sentences more varied in the Travel route section?
 * 37) ✅ Add an intersections table to the article
 * 38) I would suggest making the format of the article in line with the standards at WikiProject Canada Roads by moving some of the sections around

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 03:21, 6 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking time to review the article. I have adressed the basic ones first, and will return to the more in-depth ones tomorrow when it is earlier in the day.  Kind Regards SriMesh |  talk  05:18, 6 February 2009 (UTC)