Talk:Satan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 18:36, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  18:36, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (37.5%, but due to paragraph quote, which is properly cited and done.)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅ [churchofsatan.com], "American Heritage Dictionary: Devil". both dead.
 * I cannot find the links. Could you please state where they are located in the article? --Katolophyromai (talk) 21:42, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Ref #58, #204. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  22:36, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I have replaced the URL in reference #58 with a working URL. The URL in reference #204 actually seemed to work perfectly fine on my computer, so I am not sure why it would be labelled as "dead." In any case, that citation was only one of six citations all supporting the same statement, so I went ahead and just removed it. It could perhaps have qualified as WP:OVERCITE anyway. You may continue with the review. --Katolophyromai (talk) 02:04, 31 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Images appropriately licensed ✅

Prose Suggestions

 * is a malevolent figure in the Abrahamic religions who add a comma between religions and who.
 * When it is used without the definitive article (simply satan), the word can refer to any accuser suggest link to Article (grammar).
 * only a talking serpent suggest only the talking serpent, as I don't recall any other talking serpents in the Bible/Qur'an post-garden, and I don't believe any others are mentioned in Judeo-Christo-Islamic theology.
 * Thats all my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:55, 6 February 2018 (UTC)