Talk:Satellite Broadcasting & Communications Ass'n v. FCC

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This is moving in the right direction. Sections still need citations but thats part of editing. My last final is at 11 tomorrow so I should be able to help/be useful after that. There are a few beautification things I would like to do --Guerillero &#124; My Talk  01:46, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

Feedback/suggestions
Hi, I've been asked to add some suggestions and feedback on this article. I've made a couple of changes myself, which you can see if you press that link. I've fixed a few of the things I saw which included:
 * Not just putting a link in a reference (or an external link), try to include the title of the link, in the link itself (rather than putting it next to it), as thus: Text you want to show.
 * Using wikimarkup instead of plain text ie. using # instead of 1) or putting in headings rather than bold text.
 * Not putting external links straight into the text, try putting them as a reference or - if they're relevant to the whole article - in the external links section.

There're a couple of other things you could do to improve this article, too such as:
 * Possibly including a picture or, two although that may not be possible for this article.
 * Writing more encyclopedically ie.
 * Not:

"We are delighted that the SBCA Board of Directors has agreed to form a Foundation. Our industry has a presence in every state," said SBCA Executive Director, Joe Widoff. "Workers and their families live in thousands of communities throughout the country and the goal of the Foundation is to help meet the needs of these communities in meaningful ways."
 * More like:

Joe Widdof, the executive director of SBCA said that: "We are delighted that the SBCA Board of Directors has agreed to form a Foundation. Our industry has a presence in every state. Workers and their families live in thousands of communities throughout the country and the goal of the Foundation is to help meet the needs of these communities in meaningful ways."

I hope you find these suggestions useful, and that you can continue to improve your already-great article! Regards, Rock drum Ba-dumCrash 18:19, 9 May 2011 (UTC)

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment
This article is the subject of an educational assignment at Michigan State University supported by WikiProject U.S. Supreme Court cases and the Wikipedia Ambassador Program&#32;during the 2011 Spring term. Further details are available on the course page.

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