Talk:Save the Plastic Bag Coalition v. City of Manhattan Beach

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Hello, I just wanted to add a quick comment, overall I think the page covers the topic really well. I made a few grammar edits but nothing major. Good job guys!

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Too broad
I feel like currently this article is discussing issues of plastic bag impact on the environment and plastic bag litigation at large - which is useful information but seems like it is better relegated to other articles, such as the article on plastic bags, or a subarticle on plastic bag litigation in general, linking to this one. It'll be a bit complex to split it up, but I think this is something that will need to get done. Dcoetzee 00:57, 23 May 2012 (UTC)

New Edits
Hello, I just wanted to let you know that I will be editing this article. I have a few ideas for improvements on each section. I will be sure to post what I'm thinking of changing beforehand. Please, feel free to let me know what you think of my ideas. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uniquajanae (talk • contribs) 17:04, 26 February 2019 (UTC)

New Edits
I have posted some ideas for a few potential edits, I will be implementing this week, to my sandbox User:Uniquajanae/sandbox.savetheplasticbagmanhattan. Please take a look at my ideas and let me know what you think. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uniquajanae (talk • contribs) 17:01, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

Deleting Sections
I will be deleting the research for and against plastic bags section. It is not about the case. I will move it to a sandbox in case someone else wants to use the information for another article. I will be deleting in the next few days. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uniquajanae (talk • contribs) 14:53, 4 March 2019 (UTC)

Deleting "Other Plastic Bag" section
I will be deleting the Other Plastic Bag Litigation section within the next few days. It is not relevant to the case being discussed. I will move the information to a sandbox in case someone wants to use it for a more fitting article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uniquajanae (talk • contribs) 14:56, 4 March 2019 (UTC)