Talk:Saving Private Ryan (soundtrack)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 16:57, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * The album cover needs an alt image description; please add one
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Link "John Williams" in the infobox's "Producer" parameter please
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 1

 * Reword: "Recorded in Symphony Hall, Boston, Massachusetts, the scores were performed by the Boston Symphony Orchestra and feature vocals from the Tanglewood Festival Chorus on two of the ten compositions." --> "Recorded in Symphony Hall, Boston, Massachusetts, the scores were performed by the Boston Symphony Orchestra, with two of the ten compositions featuring vocals from the Tanglewood Festival Chorus." please
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

 * I believe you neglected to mention that the "Best Instrumental Composition Written for a Motion Picture or for Television" award is a Grammy award, so please add that so the statement is clarified
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)


 * I would add "Soundtrack opener" or even just "Opener" before "Hymn to the Fallen"
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 1

 * Add Saving Private Ryan's release year in parentheses after the title of the movie please (in this case, it would read Saving Private Ryan (1998).[2][3]"
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Also include the release years for movies Close Encounters of the Third Kind and Schindler's List please (also in parentheses of course.)
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 3

 * Provide a link to "Military drums" please
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Reword: "The two tracks entitled "Hymn to the Fallen" are the only two that feature any sort of vocals and bookend the album.[5][7]" --> ""Hymn to the Fallen" and its reprise are the only two tracks that feature any sort of vocals and bookend the album.[5][7]" please
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 1

 * "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Provide a link to "AllMusic" please (in both the paragraph and the reception box to the right of the article.)
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)


 * "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

 * Please add the release year for Flags of Our Fathers in parentheses as well (in this case, the year is 2006.)
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 4

 * "chosen by fan vote." --> "chosen by fan votes."
 * Fixed. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Other comments

 * Please add a "Release history" box immediately following the "Credits" section please; for an example, feel free to look at This Is What the Truth Feels Like
 * Done. Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

End of GA Review:
A very good article! I will be placing it on hold for seven days to allow for any changes or corrections to be made to it. Good luck and thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 23:22, 14 June 2016 (UTC).
 * Fixed all these! Thanks for the review man, I appreciate it! Disc Wheel  ( T  +  C )  03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)