Talk:Scapholunate advanced collapse

Wiki Education assignment: 2023-24 WikiMed Directed Studies
— Assignment last updated by RiotingDaffodil (talk) 18:08, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

Peer review:

Lead- introductory sentence leading to paragraph that highlights the sections of the article

Content- important pertinent information about the epidemiology, diagnosis, and treatment. Possibly could add a clinical signs and symptoms page as people reading may be laypeople looking into their symptoms

Tone & balance- neutral tone without any kind of leaning or promotion of diagnostics or certain treatments/procedures

Sources- Good articles from the original authors that first described scapholunate collapse and systemic review going over more modern findings

Organization- Good, logical organization of topics

Media- AP XR image properly demonstrates the condition and caption helps interpret it as well

Overall- Good overall article written basically from scratch. Only suggestion I would do is to have a signs & symptoms addition — Preceding unsigned comment added by KMaiTBinh (talk • contribs) 16:06, 17 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the feedback! I added a signs and symptoms section. Opmed2013 (talk) 16:49, 21 March 2024 (UTC)