Talk:Scarlet Heart

God, I hate the idea that Cecilia works with Nicky Wu
God, I hate the idea that Cecilia works with Nicky Wu. Why? Because Cecilia has much better chemistry with Yuan Hong onscreen than other actors she'd with in the past.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 04:57, 28 May 2011 (UTC)

Startling by Each Step (novel)
Hi, I've made a page for the novel. Please feel free to make contributions.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 17:57, 5 November 2011 (UTC)

Need clarification and needs cleans up
What does this sentence mean: "In a last-ditch effort to save Yinsi and her friends from their terrible fates, Ruoxi warns Yinsi to be wary of Yinzhen." There hasn't been anything before this that indicates a horrible fate is in store. Does someone know about these fates in advance? Please explain here, on the Talk page, so I can make the plot summary make sense. Thanks.--TEHodson 06:22, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

Someone else wrote it. I added details within the summary in hope you can understand it now.

Also, who divorces whom, and who commits suicide? I took out those sentences as they made no sense, but will put them back in once this is explained. This plot summary is way too long and completely impossible to follow. It should be much, much shorter, with a minimum of detail. A very rough sketch. I suggest you cut out most of it and just give a very simple explanation of the largest points. I can correct grammar, but I can't cut plot elements when I don't know the material and have no idea what is really important and what isn't. Someone has to make some tough choices, otherwise the plot summary is such a nightmare of names and details that it's unreadable. --TEHodson 06:33, 21 December 2011 (UTC)


 * I just spent half an hour editing the plot summary, only to have it all lost when you, neobatfreak, decided to edit the page, too, causing an edit conflict. I'm not doing it again. I asked you to leave notes HERE. It's very poor form to ask for help then go back and mess with the page while that help is being given. I don't understand any of what the plot says, but I had corrected the grammar and reduced some of the length. I may take another look at it later, but I'm done for now. You also still are not leaving edit summaries, which makes following your work impossible. I was willing to help, but you're making more obstacles than I can manage. Sorry. --TEHodson 06:41, 21 December 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm sorry, but I don't think I'm qualified to edit this page. I have no idea what any of it means, and could make it even more incoherent by trying to deal with it. Find one of the editors who has already worked on it, someone who can write at least fairly well, and leave them a message. If it's important to them, they'll come fix it. I admire your intention, and apologize for not being able to do this. Maybe on some other article I can lend a hand. And start writing edit summaries!! I can't stress their importance enough.--TEHodson 07:41, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

Wikipedians, please revise this article's grammar, spelling, structure, etc.  It would be great, because this article is an eyesore because of it imperfect writing.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 19:17, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
 * I've done all I can; hopefully it's sufficient. Happy Holidays! The Utahraptor Talk/Contribs 18:03, 28 December 2011 (UTC)

Translation request
Wikipedians, please translate the plot summary of the article to 步步驚心 (電視劇). Thank you very much.--NeoBatfreak (talk) 23:10, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

"Treading On Thin Ice" listed at Redirects for discussion
A discussion is taking place to address the redirect Treading On Thin Ice. The discussion will occur at Redirects for discussion/Log/2020 December 4 until a consensus is reached, and readers of this page are welcome to contribute to the discussion. Opencooper (talk) 01:50, 4 December 2020 (UTC)