Talk:Scary Godmother: Halloween Spooktakular/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments later in the week. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 23:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks! HumanxAnthro (talk) 01:49, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Using Amazon as a reference doesn't seem like a good choice per WP:AMAZON. I suggest replacing it with this.
 * Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:19, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
 * As the two references after "first book" are already in #Background_and_development, they're not necessary for the lead.
 * Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 22:56, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Everything else looks good.

Plot

 * "Katie, Bert and Daryl" "Katie, Bert, and Daryl"
 * "Bert, Daryl and Katie" "Bert, Daryl, and Katie"
 * "He declares himself the "leader" out of nowhere by winning a rock, paper, scissors game." "He declares himself the "leader" after winning a rock, paper, scissors game."
 * All of the following above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 22:58, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

Background and development

 * "US$350,000" "$350,000"
 * "vice president Kim Dent Wilder" "Mainframe vice president Kim Dent Wilder"
 * "a TV series" "a television series"
 * All above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:07, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

Workflow

 * In the last paragraph of this section, remove the last part of the quote "and generally bugged everyone several times a week with my yammering phone calls" as it seems unnecessary, and add an [and] in-between "designed sets, painted backgrounds".
 * Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:08, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

Casting

 * This section looks good.

Animation

 * ""blend"ing" "blending"
 * Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:08, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

Visual style

 * This section also looks good.

Release

 * This reference in the article says the film went to Region 1 DVD on September 3, not September 8. Also, change this in the lead.
 * "Germany and Italy" "Germany, and Italy"
 * All above done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:10, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * "The Chicago Tribune" "The Chicago Tribune"
 * Done HumanxAnthro (talk) 03:09, 29 January 2021 (UTC)