Talk:Scary Monsters (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

General

 * No dab links. Great work!
 * No dead links. Great work!

Infobox

 * There are no issues in the infobox.

Lede

 * "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the series' wider mythology, or the overarching fictional history" → "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
 * Rephrased.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Scary Monsters" was written based largely around the teaser.". Huh?
 * Rephrased.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Plot

 * There are no issues

Production

 * Perhaps an image for the section
 * I can't find a suitable picture.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Harrison had first appeared in the Spotnitz-penned eighth season episode "Alone". Jenkins' character was created and named in memory of a The X-Files internet fan and prolific writer of fan fiction of the same name, who had died of cancer on February 10, 2001" citation/reference needed
 * It's reference 5.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "fucking". Perhaps "f***ing", etc., or something where, well, you know, anybody can read the article
 * This shouldn't be done per WP:CENSOR.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "During the filming of "Scary Monsters", the cast and crew of The X-Files learned that the series would not be renewed for a tenth season.". Re-write to: "During the filming of the episode, The X-Files' was canceled by the Fox network, meaning that the show would not return for a tenth season, etc"
 * Rephrased.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Broadcast and reception

 * Unlink Fox as it is already linked above
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)