Talk:Schoolin' Life/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 19:16, 27 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * No issues

Lead

 * ...which was sold exclusively at Target Corporation... Change "Target Corporation" to "Target"
 * Jordan Young aka DJ Swivel mixed the song at New York's Jungle City Studios. → Change "Jordan Young aka DJ Swivel" to "Jordan Young, also known by his stage name DJ Swivel"
 * ...and affirms that she certified neither as a teacher... → Fix prose to make phrase read better

Production and mixing

 * ...which was sold exclusively at Target Corporation[2]... → Change "Target Corporation" to "Target"

Composition and lyrical interpretation

 * No issues

Critical reception

 * No issues

Live performance and use in media

 * No issues

Chart performance

 * No issues