Talk:ScienTOMogy/GA1

GA passed

 * 1) Well written? Yes; I found no major problems (although I corrected a few things as I read through it).
 * 2) Factually accurate and verifiable? Seems to be fine; good use of inline citations and the  templates.
 * 3) Broad in its coverage? Yes.
 * 4) Neutral? Yes.
 * 5) Stable? Yes. Looks like Cirt has done some extensive editing recently, but no edit wars and nothing to cause concern.
 * 6) Illustrated? Only one picture, but it's pretty hard to illustrate a website; that's about as good as one can expect. If you could find a free image of Tom Cruise or something (especially if it was of him jumping on the couch, though I can't imagine those broadcast snapshots would be free), that would be nice.

Some thoughts/recommendations as I was reading through:
 * Is the "W" in "web site" capitalized? Seeing it capitalized struck me as a bit odd. But I have no idea what MoS says, and this is just my own thought/preference.
 * As "Church of Scientology" is a proper noun, should "the church" be "the Church" ? Again, just me.

Good work! Dylan 05:46, 2 November 2007 (UTC) Thank you!
 * 1) I always thought it was capitalized, but looking at the Wikipedia article for Web site, looks like one could go either way stylistically, just so long as its uniform throughout the article.
 * 2) You are correct, it should be capitalized. I will look for this and correct it.  Cirt 05:48, 2 November 2007 (UTC).
 * ✅ - Forgot to note I went and corrected that. Cirt 04:10, 3 November 2007 (UTC).