Talk:Science Park station (MBTA)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:46, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

That's all I have in a first pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:04, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Create plausible redirect at Science Park/West End.
 * ✅ Also created Science Park/West End station.
 * " MBTA) Green Line in" missing opening parenthesis.
 * "It is located ... The station is located ..." oddly repetitive and confusing.
 * "by a FY 2019 count" what is that?
 * ✅ Added a wikilink.
 * "The Lechmere Viaduct was built in 1912, but Science Park station was not built until 1955" feels odd, why do we care about the Viaduct? This article is about the station.
 * ✅ Clarified
 * "	April 30–November 4" spaced.
 * "older Type 7 LRVs)" wut?
 * ✅ wikilinked
 * "grade-separated" link?
 * "Charlestown" link?
 * "The Museum of Science opened" overlinked.
 * "in 1951. In 1953" repetitive prose.
 * "cover the $150,000 to $250,000 cost" inflate to modern times.
 * This already uses inflation with the most current available data.
 * "The Metropolitan District Commission constructed" that's a dab link.
 * "The lightly-used station was" new section so reiterate the subject.
 * "under TD Garden" no context for us non-experts here.
 * I don't see what else should be explained here. TD Garden is wikilinked, and the Causeway Street elevated replacement is discussed on that article.
 * "In 2016, MassDOT began" explain.
 * "periods.[31][29] This" ref order.
 * "Type 8 LRVs" what??
 * ✅ Linked.
 * Link Suffolk Downs in the article.
 * "The lightly-used station was" new section so reiterate the subject.
 * "under TD Garden" no context for us non-experts here.
 * I don't see what else should be explained here. TD Garden is wikilinked, and the Causeway Street elevated replacement is discussed on that article.
 * "In 2016, MassDOT began" explain.
 * "periods.[31][29] This" ref order.
 * "Type 8 LRVs" what??
 * ✅ Linked.
 * Link Suffolk Downs in the article.
 * "Type 8 LRVs" what??
 * ✅ Linked.
 * Link Suffolk Downs in the article.
 * Thanks for the review! I was able to implement all but two of your comments (see above). Pi.1415926535 (talk) 07:46, 26 June 2022 (UTC)