Talk:Score (Carol Lloyd album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 04:40, 3 February 2018 (UTC)


 * I will grab this for a review if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 04:40, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Lead and infobox
 * For this part (the label which specialized solely in disco music.), I believe that a comma is needed after “label” and before “which”.
 * Done


 * For this part (as singles to support and promote the album), I am not sure that “support” and “promote” are both needed as they both seem to be conveying the same meaning, at least to me, so I would choose one or the other.
 * Done


 * For this part (the album was similarly well received), I would clarify that you mean well received by critics.
 * Done


 * Background
 * Please link Carol Lloyd on the first instance in which you mention her in the body of the article.
 * Done


 * For this part (The label would consist solely of artists), I would clarify “the label” as Earmac Records as you mentioned two record labels in the previous sentence.
 * Done


 * For this part (It was distributed to the), I think it should read as “through the” as opposed to “to the”.
 * Done


 * For this part (It now included the 7" and 12" versions), I do not believe that the “now” part is needed.
 * Done


 * Promotion
 * I would retitle the section to “Singles” as it focuses entirely on the single releases.
 * Done


 * Please move the B-side link up to the first instance in which the term is used (i.e. in the “Background” section).
 * Done


 * For this part (and list it as a recommended track for readers of the magazine), I think you mean “listed” as opposed to “list”.
 * Done


 * Reception
 * I have no issues with this part.


 * Track listing
 * Please add a note about the producers.
 * Done


 * For the “2016 digital bonus tracks” collapsable bit, I would include the writers as well to avoid having it look blank/empty.
 * Done


 * Personel
 * No issues here


 * Release history
 * I believe a section like this would be necessary.
 * Done


 * References
 * Make sure that the work/publisher parameters for each citation is linked. For instance, Billboard should be linked in all of the citations.
 * Done


 * External links
 * No issues here


 * Final comments
 * Wonderful work on this! Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to promote this as a GA. Aoba47 (talk) 05:04, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
 * – I completed revising the article per your suggestions. Thank you very much, Carbrera (talk) 06:45, 3 February 2018 (UTC).


 * Verdict
 * Thank you for addressing everything. I will ✅ this. Aoba47 (talk) 15:08, 3 February 2018 (UTC)