Talk:Scott Brown (footballer, born April 1985)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 (talk · contribs) 10:53, 3 March 2021 (UTC)

I will take a look at this. Review coming over the next few days. REDMAN 2019 ( talk ) 10:53, 3 March 2021 (UTC)

General

 * Do we know how many appearances he made for Welshpool? If so, then it should be added to the infobox.
 * Afraid not. It's not a professional football league.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * A "Personal life" section should probably be created. The death of his father seems to have made quite a impact on him. Also, I'm seeing references to children being born. Why is there no mention of marriage or his life outside football? Surely there are sources for it?
 * I've put together a personal life section. Yeah you were right about his father.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Cheltenham Town

 * Try to avoid red-links. Such as 2005-06, 2006-07, 2007-08 and 2009-10 Cheltenham Town seasons. Just link it to "x" in English football for the relevant year.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "when Cheltenham played out a 2–2 draw" > "in a 2–2 draw".
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * The source for his FA cup debut just shows that he was playing. It doesn't say anything about a debut.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * His league debut against Barnet and the rest of the 2005–06 season apart from the play-off final is unreferenced.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Ref 12 has nothing to do with the sentence it's referencing.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "He made 40 appearances across the 2008–09 season but could not prevent the club from suffering relegation back into League Two." ref needed.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "He was given the number 1 shirt for the 2009–10 season following the departure of Higgs, and made 44 appearances as Cheltenham finished just one place and four points above relegation into non-league." Ref needed.
 * --EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "He played all 50 games of the 2010–11 season," Ref needed
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "He was an ever-present in league and cup competitions across the 54 game campaign" ref needed.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "He played 49 of the club's 50 games of the 2013–14 season as Cheltenham dropped to 17th-position." ref needed.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Aberdeen

 * Is it really nessercery to mention both of the club's nicknames right before the result of his first two games? I would just remove them.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Ref 31 makes no mention of Brown playing. It just talks about the other loanee.
 * Changed.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * There is no mention of Collin's Rotherham connections in the source.
 * Added another source and removed Rotherham.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Port Vale

 * "2018-19 Port Vale F.C. season" repeat linked here.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "He was named on the League Two team of the week after keeping a clean sheet in a 1–0 win over Salford City on 17 October." In what year?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Career statistics

 * The red-links need linking same as above.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Refs

 * Ref 9 no longer takes you to the page. It needs replacing.
 * archive found.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Ref 17, 47 and 51 need authors.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Ref 35 url takes you to a "page not found". Replacement needed.
 * archive found.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments
There is quite a lot of work to be done here. Mostly on The Cheltenham section and with the creation of the "personal life" section. So I'm putting this on hold for now.
 * I believe I have addressed those concerns.--EchetusXe 21:27, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Well done. I am happy to pass this now. REDMAN 2019  ( talk ) 11:38, 7 March 2021 (UTC)