Talk:Scott Daniels (ice hockey)

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Scott Daniels
Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? - There are no in-text citations or references listed

Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? - What is present in the article is neutral and does not appear to be bias in any way

Do the links work? - After checking the external links for career statistics it appears they are in working condition

Is anything missing that could be added? - Background, early life/before professional career, career history and stats are possible ideas

J.beech96 (talk) 02:18, 11 March 2017 (UTC)

Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * Everything in the article is relevant to the topic, however, many additions need to be made. In terms of distractions, I do not think it is necessary to lead with the fact that Scott is a First Nation Aboriginal. Nationality is one thing, but I have never seen an individual's Wikipedia page lead with something other than their current or former occupation. The introduction paragraph also contains a bit too much detail and could flow nicer from point to point.

Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * The article comes off as being neutral and unbiased. With the little bit of information that is provided, it would be tough to be anything but neutral.

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * I do not believe any viewpoints are over or underrepresented. Although, there is a heavy emphasis on the fact that Scott is a First Nation Aboriginal. I suspect this is due to the fact that past students from this class are the only ones who have edited the article.

Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article?
 * After checking the citations, I found that one of the links does not work. This citation is heavily referenced throughout the opening paragraph and will need to be tracked down.

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added? Jared Garon (talk) 01:03, 17 March 2018 (UTC)
 * None of the information seems to be out of date. There is still quite a bit of information to add to the article including early childhood, career statistics, and other interesting information from Scott's playing career.