Talk:Scott Mason (radio personality)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 06:35, 28 August 2022 (UTC)

This is a quickfail. This article has come to GA before it's ready.

To do before it comes back:


 * Improve sourcing. An LA radio personality should have Los Angeles Times coverage, not to mention material in Radio & Records. I am happy to assist, as this is my field.
 * More info about his on-air activity at KROQ will assist with broadening the GA's scope to fit the subject.


 * Improve copy throughout. The copy needs editing with some specific notes:
 * Mention call signs where appropriate. e.g. a new LA radio station called Ten-Q
 * Public affairs shouldn't be capitalized. That paragraph probably goes into too much detail.