Talk:Scott Miller (pop musician)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: SteveStrummer (talk · contribs) 02:22, 21 June 2016 (UTC)

I'm pleased to take up the GA review process for this article. I'm familiar with (and enthusiastic about) the subject matter. As a preliminary review, I see two main obstacles to GA status: There are other, lesser issues that I'll note in detail next time, but please address these for now. SteveStrummer (talk) 02:22, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
 * The lead section needs to be refined and expanded so that it covers all important points made in the article;
 * Some paragraphs lack citations, particularly in the Game Theory section.
 * @Lwarrenwiki, I'm afraid the 7-day limit for a review is expiring in a matter of hours. I will extend it on my own for a little while, but please leave word here about your plans for continuing. Thanks, SteveStrummer (talk) 23:51, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the flexibility. I've had rather a lot of real-life work in the past few weeks, but I hope to implement those edits within a couple of days. I've never been through a GA review before, and I was very glad to see that you were the one to pick this up and shepherd the process! Lwarrenwiki (talk) 03:58, 5 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Great news! Looking forward to it. SteveStrummer (talk) 22:17, 5 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Result: Not listed. May be renominated. SteveStrummer (talk) 04:20, 26 July 2016 (UTC)