Talk:Scott Perunovich/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:51, 11 May 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 19:51, 11 May 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Delink American per MOS:OVERLINK ✅
 * "winning bronze." - the bronze medal. ✅

Personal life

 * UMBBullDogs does not state Perunovich's birth date; another source is needed for this ✅
 * "Perunovich wished to attend the University of Minnesota." - any information to say why? ✅

Playing career

 * "where he led the team to a 37-10-5" - think the hyphens can be replaced by en dashes ✅
 * "Overall, he won 80% of his matches" - should be percent per MOS:PERCENT ✅
 * "and was named the Mesabi Daily News, Hibbing Daily Tribune and Grand Rapids Herald Review Tennis Player of the Year." - the names of the newspapers are better off italized and wikilinked to their respective articles ✅
 * "Perunovich joined the U.S. National Under-18 Team for two games against St. Cloud State" - a period is missing from the end of this sentence ✅
 * Add a link for St. Cloud State to St. Cloud State Huskies men's ice hockey ✅

Collegiate

 * Wikilink College of Liberal Arts to University of Minnesota College of Liberal Arts ✅
 * Wikilink goal to Goal (ice hockey) and overtime to Overtime (ice hockey) ✅
 * Wikilink Michigan Tech to Michigan Tech Huskies men's ice hockey and Maine Black Bears to Maine Black Bears men's ice hockey ✅
 * "after the strong play in his rookie season Perunovich made the midterm ranks" - think the wording can be switched for readability ✅
 * 2018 NHL Entry Draft should be wikilinked on the first mention, not the second ✅
 * Add a link to Bowling Green State University to Bowling Green Falcons men's ice hockey ✅
 * A wikilink to Assist to Assist (ice hockey) ✅
 * "On July 28, 2019, Perunovich committed to another year with the Bulldogs. and proved once again to be an asset to the UMD Bulldogs." - repetition of "Bulldogs" ✅
 * Wikilink National Collegiate Hockey Association ✅
 * Add a link for NCHC Offensive Defenseman of the Year to List of NCHC Offensive Defenseman of the Year
 * What do you mean? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:19, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "Perunovich subsequently became the sixth Bulldogs player to receive" - more concise; was the sixth Bulldogs player to receive ✅
 * "the Hobey Baker." - Hobey Baker Award. ✅

International play

 * Wikilink U.S. National Junior Team to United States men's national junior ice hockey team ✅
 * "After making the cut, he helped Team USA win a bronze medal. He scored one goal and two assists during the 2018 World Junior Ice Hockey Championships." - I believe these two sentences should be merged and shortened accordingly ✅
 * The sole mention of Team Canada should be wikilinked to Canada men's national junior ice hockey team ✅

Awards and honors

 * The USHS award needs a reliable reference to verify it ✅