Talk:Scream & Shout/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 19:15, 30 March 2013 (UTC)

Reviewing.  TB randley  19:15, 30 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Will you post the review soon or should I re-nominate it? - Saulo  Talk to Me 15:07, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

Comments


 * "some of whom" should be "some of which"
 * - Saulo  Talk to Me 03:07, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
 * "A Rap-Up reviewer wrote about the use of Auto-Tune on will.i.am's vocals" what did they state, can you elaborate on that?
 * The autor states, "The electro-dance record, which will appear on will’s upcoming album #willpower, features a robotic hook from Britney and Auto-Tuned vocals from will". I re-wrote the sentence but I'm not sure if it's clear still. Take a look. - Saulo  Talk to Me 03:07, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Generally, About.com is not considered to be a reliable source and thus I would remove the review from their members.
 * The review is from Bill Lamb, a music journalist since 1999, who covers the Top 40 / Pop section of About.com, and has interviewed many celebrities for the site. Generally the site may not be considered reliable, but isn't this case reliable enough to be kept? - Saulo  Talk to Me 03:07, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Please do not use curly quotation marks, such as ’ or ”, and stick with the regular per MOS:QUOTE
 * "On January 1, 2013, will.i.am said that he would release a club remix of "Scream & Shout" featuring American rapper Waka Flocka Flame and producer Hit-Boy the same day" I do not understanding the meaning of "the same day", can it perhaps be removed?
 * - Saulo  Talk to Me 03:07, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

TB randley (T • C  • B) 02:35, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

In this case I think we could consider that review a reliable source given the above. Since everything else is addressed I'll pass the article. Wizardman 15:05, 21 May 2013 (UTC)