Talk:Scream (Usher song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:37, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

✅ Re-written. ✅ Re-written. ✅ Re-written. ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅
 * and ballads elements. → This doesn't quite make sense. Maybe elements of balladry would sound better.
 * its musical elements to that → Not the right word, use structure or composition instead of elements. Elements would be a specific part, but the critic is generalising.
 * produced and wrote "Scream" along with Usher and Savan Kotecha. → Implies that Usher and Savan also produced it.
 * recorded in MXM → recorded at MXM
 * Link mixing
 * I think you should mention Pop and Adult Pop in the Chart performance
 * The song was performed during E3 2012 to promote Dance Central 3 in which Usher performed choreography portrayed in the video game to the attendees. → Need a source
 * a Dead link needs tending to

A well written article, I like this song :-). On hold. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   22:32, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Status
 * Thanks for the review, everything should be sorted. I also like this song :D.  Et 3  rnal  18:45, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   18:50, 20 June 2013 (UTC)