Talk:Se Me Olvidó Otra Vez/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:59, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

This should be over and done with soon! --K. Peake 08:59, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The B-side is not sourced anywhere in the body
 * WP:OVERLINK of Juan Gabriel under songwriter(s)
 * "from his fourth studio album," → "for his fourth studio album,"
 * "It is a ranchera song that" → "The song is a ranchera number that"
 * "who loved her." → "who loved a woman."
 * "The track was released as" → "It was released as"
 * ""Se Me Olvido Otra Vez" has been" → "The song has been"
 * "has re-recorded the track twice," → "has re-recorded the song twice,"
 * Add a comma after Por Los Siglos (2001)
 * Wikilink live album
 * "was also met with positive reactions" → "also received positive reactions"
 * Pipe 2000 to 1st Annual Grammy Awards
 * "at number five and four" → "at numbers five and four"

Background and composition

 * Remove the comma before El Alma Joven
 * Remove the comma after mariachi songs
 * "composed all the track" → "composed all the tracks"

Promotion and reception

 * Wikilink live album
 * Pipe compilation to Compilation album

Maná version

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "on their second live" → "on their second live album"
 * "called their performance of" → "called the performance of"
 * "A writer Radio Programas del Perú" → "A writer for Radio Programas del Perú"
 * "at number five and four" → "at numbers five and four"

Charts

 * Should a col really be used when there are only two positions for each and the formatting creates a lot of white space on my screen?

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; nice work on this one! --K. Peake 09:50, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ Erick (talk) 18:27, 18 December 2022 (UTC)
 * You still need to source and mention the B-side in the body, add speech marks around it in the infobox and change met with to received positive reactions in the lead. --K. Peake 10:31, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
 * @Kyle Peake ✅ Thank you for catching those. Erick (talk) 15:19, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, thanks for picking these up in the end! --K. Peake 08:57, 30 December 2022 (UTC)