Talk:Seamen's Church Institute of New York and New Jersey

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Hi there, I am in process of creating this article. It is about a well know, century old, philanthropic and faith based organization. The existence of an article about SCI in Wikipedia will help us spread the word about the availability of our services to a wider community. If you have any suggestions on how to make this page better please post, also its Wikipedia, so dive on in :-) BKizel (talk) 22:47, 22 February 2008 (UTC)


 * see the changes i have just made, and use them as a guide: no rhetoric, no public relations, no repeated fine phrases such as "2,200 miles of America's inland waterways", no claims to uniqueness that you cannot prove with a clear reference. The way you would write it in an encyclopedia, not a mailing. The purpose of WP is most emphatically NOT to " help us spread the word about the availability of our services to a wider community." -- the purpose is to provide sourced factual information about your organization to those who come here seeking objective encyclopedic material. Please write it accordingly. DGG (talk) 23:45, 22 February 2008 (UTC)