Talk:Sebastian Kurz/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Shushugah (talk · contribs) 22:00, 1 January 2022 (UTC)

Initial review
Immediately while reading the lede, I was unclear if I was reading the lede or already beginning the article. It's too long and does not adequately summarize the most important points, for example it continues with his personal life, and yet immediately after is another section on his personal life. I believe the lede can be shortened to 1-2 paragraphs maximum. It's only all the way in the bottom, that I even learn where Thiel is currently working (With Thiel Capital, something that likely should be in the lede).

Some sections like Sebastian Kurz could be removed entirely, as they don't relate to Sebastian Kurz as a person, but merely his administration.