Talk:Second Battle of Kitshanga

Draftified
Hi, I have moved this article to Draft space as it's not currently ready for mainspace. After following recommendations for improvement, please submit the draft through the WP:AFC process. Suggestions:


 * The lede needs to be clearer. What year did the battle take place?
 * Who or what is M23 - the link you've used is to a disambiguation page, and all the linked articles are roads.
 * The first three references are bare URLs (and therefore prone to link rot) - please provide full-format references.
 * Incorrect date formats used in several references.
 * Copyedit to clarify abbreviations, etc.

When these issues are fixed, and the article has been moved back to mainspace, please include in appropriate Categories and Wikiprojects. Regards, Bastun Ėġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ! 15:40, 30 January 2024 (UTC)


 * Just fixed most of the issues above, the article should be a lot better now. Jebiguess (talk) 17:33, 30 January 2024 (UTC)


 * You have fixed some of the issues, not all. I asked yo uto submit the article through the WP:AFC process; if an article has been moved to draft space, there is good reason, and best practice is to not move the article back yourself. Bastun Ėġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ! 17:38, 30 January 2024 (UTC)