Talk:Second Battle of Newtonia Site/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:25, 29 September 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:25, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
 * No DABs
 * Images properly licensed
 * supplies and soldiers were lost to capture Howzabout a simple "captured"?
 * Done
 * Blunt was considering ordering an overall withdrawal why "overall"?
 * Not sure. Removed
 * Additional Union army artillery?
 * Fixed.
 * artillery position on ridge missing word?
 * Indeed. Added.
 * Compress the history section, there's a lot of stuff there that doesn't really relate to Price's Raid or the battle.
 * Trimmed about a third of it, including everything pre-1864.  Is this better, or does a little more need to go?
 * No, looks good. I would suggest that some photos would be useful if you can find them. Battlefield markers, overall views from a height and/or surviving structures would be subjects.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:22, 8 October 2020 (UTC)