Talk:Secret Dreams and Forbidden Fire/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:47, 9 June 2015 (UTC)

Hi please start by correcting the external links in the checklinks tool on the right and the disambiguation links.
 * It was released on 3 May 1986, by Columbia Records, as the follow-up to her fifth studio album, Faster Than the Speed of Night (1983). --> What do you mean by a followup?
 * The album was a commercial success, reaching number one on the Norwegian Album Charts. --> Subjective, how can a #1 on a pretty minor chart be commercial success?
 * The first para for the Background section needs many more inline citations. All I can see is an iTunes link.
 * I'm also not believing these liner notes as just sources.
 * Also, there's hardly any composition related details in the article. This is really incomplete.
 * Steven Wine criticized the length of the tracks --> From which publication?
 * In 1985, Tyler was recruited by Giorgio Moroder to record "Here She Comes" for the 1984 restoration version of the 1927 German film Metropolis --> This is just sourced to an iTunes link. Fails WP:V
 * The next line is totally unsourced
 * Again there is no commercial aspects of the album being discussed here at all.


 * Final comments
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Failing this, a lot of more work is required to promote this as GA — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat  ] 11:30, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Failing this, a lot of more work is required to promote this as GA — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat  ] 11:30, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Failing this, a lot of more work is required to promote this as GA — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat  ] 11:30, 26 June 2015 (UTC)