Talk:Secrets (Regard and Raye song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:36, 2 October 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 10:36, 2 October 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "It was written by" → "The song was written by" to make it clear what you are referring to
 * "The song was released as" → "It was released as"
 * "It is an English-language deep and retro-sounding club, house and R&B song, touching on" → "An English-language deep and retro-sounding club, house and R&B song, it touches on"
 * "was met with critical acclaim" → "received critical acclaim"
 * "the music, production as well as Raye's" → "the music, production and Raye's"
 * Mention some of the notable countries it charted in
 * ""Secrets" received a nomination" → "The song received a nomination"

Background and composition

 * Any actual info you can add about the background of how the collaborators came together or what the basis of the song was?
 * Swap the release sentence with the writing/production one since that came before the release
 * Pipe bass line to Bassline
 * ""I had written the top line of [" → ""I'd written the top line [of " per paraphrasing of the source

Reception and promotion

 * Corona should be capitalised per the source
 * "the song as "powerful track" → "the song as a "powerful piece" per the source
 * Mention that the Dance charts are US ones
 * "and the United Kingdom." → "and the UK." per the full name having been used last time
 * "Preceded by the release of a lyrics video" → "Preceded by the release of a lyric video" with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "an accompanying music video for "Secrets" was" → "a music video for "Secrets" was"
 * The word both is not needed before their roles

Track listing

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * For Czech Republic, Mexico and Slovakia, should more than one chart be included?
 * Remove the US Streaming Hot Dance/Electronic Streaming Songs chart per the main one being included

Year-end charts

 * Remove the Portugal ones per WP:Record charts

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Wikilink Ministry of Sound

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 11:58, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello thank you for this review. I will continue with the remaining issues after a few moments. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:19, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, kudos to you for the quick response! --K. Peake 07:55, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Cool, thank you. :D Iaof2017 (talk) 11:51, 3 October 2022 (UTC)