Talk:Secrets That I Never Want to Know/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 05:58, 2 December 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * There is one deadlink
 * "Desperate Housewives focuses on the lives of several residents..." Several?
 * "...who tells him that he will only be forgiven if he turns himself in;..." Insert bolded
 * "The episode is only one of two season premieres Cherry did not write himself, as he took on a reduced production role for the eighth season in order to develop a new series while Daily was given more creative authority.[14]" Insert bolded?
 * The last two sentences in the ratings paragraph are a little confusing. Are you talking about Pan Am or Desperate Housewives?
 * "The episode received mixed to positive critical reviews." -> "Secrets That I Never Want to Know" received mixed to positive critical reviews.
 * "generally positive" or "mixed to positive" reviews?
 * "...From the funny car theft scene to the ... housewives swim only scene, ..." I know this is a partial quote, but what does the bolded mean? Would it be more clear with the full quote?
 * "TV Fanatic's Christina Tran gave the episode a positive review, giving it 4 out of 5 stars.[25] " giving -> handing out?
 * "She also appreciated the writers' decision not to prolong Tom..." She -> Tran
 * Almost flawless referencing. Only issue: Ref 6: add date (7/18/2008)

Great, great article. But then again, your articles are always well written and sourced. Only minor issues above, and then I'll be happy to pass this one.  Ruby  2010/  2013  06:54, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good. All changes have been addressed, so pass for GA. Nice work!  Ruby  2010/  2013  05:02, 5 December 2011 (UTC)