Talk:Seethamma Vakitlo Sirimalle Chettu/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:28, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

I'll finish this soon JAG  UAR   18:28, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * I would recommend merging the last paragraph into the fourth, per WP:LEADLENGTH
 * "Produced by Dil Raju's Sri Venkateswara Creations, it features Daggubati Venkates" - would sound better as It was produced by Dil Raju's Sri Venkateswara Creations, and features Daggubati Venkates
 * "the Good Samaritan teaches his sons and Geetha's father the value of spreading love in life; this is the film's centerpiece" - centrepiece
 * "by his family, lives in the village of that name" - of the same name (minor)
 * "At the wedding Peddodu and Geetha's father argue" - comma between "wedding" and "Peddodu"
 * "Relangi Uncle is injured in an accident" - would "Uncle Relangi" be the correct order?
 * "turns out to be the son of Peddodu's former boss's brother" - boss' (in this case)
 * "...calls her by name instead of "Hey!" and "Oy!" They are married" - missing full stop

On hold
Another well written and comprehensive article, well done! I found no prose issues with the latter half of the article, however I did find a few minor issues with the lead (which can easily be addressed). Once all of the above are clarified this should easily pass  JAG  UAR   19:20, 28 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, Jaguar. Your comments have been resolved. —  Ssven2  Speak 2 me 01:13, 29 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them, Ssven! This now meets the GA criteria and is good to go. Well done on writing another piece of quality work  JAG  UAR   17:05, 29 September 2015 (UTC)