Talk:Sega AM3/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 05:24, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Namcokid 47  (Contribs) 05:24, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Reminder to not neglect your review duties. These are supposed to be finished within 7 days. Cognissonance (talk) 13:32, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

- A month overdue, but here are my comments. Other than that, I think this looks good. I think I'm going to simply stop reviewing Good Articles from now on considering the colossal amount of time it's taken for me to review two, rather short articles that I had said I'd get to many months ago. I understand the frustration of waiting so long, so I apologize. Once these issues are taken care of, I'll pass this and Sega AM2. Namcokid 47  (Contribs) 16:19, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I'd remove the "also" from the first sentence.
 * "The AM3 designation would continue until 2009 until it was merged into other departments." - This reads a bit awkwardly. I'd change this to something like: "The AM3 designation continued until 2009 when it was merged into other departments."
 * The last two sentences in the History section are better as being part of the previous paragraph.
 * All right, we should be good. I get the way you feel about reviewing Good Articles; between them and FACs, they take time to do reviews and you really have to be able to dedicate to it.  I wouldn't stop "from now on", you have a decent knack for it.  But I'd maybe take a break until you're ready to go again - for me, it's often months, but it could be different from you.  If it helps, I wasn't really that frustrated - I just looked at AM2 and went, "Hey, how long ago was that?" and I think some of the GA regulars are monitoring because of the backlog drive.  (Oh, and big FYI: put your name down here with the GA's you've reviewed since April 1 and they'll send you a barnstar at the end of the month.  Then you can at least walk away with a little more sense of accomplishment that you deserve).

I appreciate you reviewing my articles aggressively the last month; it's made for good improvements and rapid advances to GA quality. Red Phoenix talk  00:19, 9 May 2020 (UTC)