Talk:Sejm of the Duchy of Warsaw/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)

Happy to review.  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)

Comments
"The numbers of deputies and senators are given for the period after the incorporation of Galicia following the Polish–Austrian War" I think this is a bit out of place. Perhaps put it as a note on the actual figures?

" presented to it" Presented by who?

"disband the chamber of deputies" Disband implies scrapping the whole thing altogether, did you mean dissolve?

I don't really think the lead summarizes the article in sufficient detail, either. There is no mention of Napoleon, composition or its "competences". Could you add to it?

Thanks,  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  11:38, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm traveling out of town at the moment in remote areas with limited Internet access, should be able to address above in a few days. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 15:47, 10 July 2013 (UTC)


 * @User:Retrolord: all issues above addressed, I hope. Please let me know what else should be done. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 12:40, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Ok Thanks, I'll give it one more quick look then pass it.  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  13:06, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

PASS!  ★ ★ RetroLord★ ★  00:56, 18 July 2013 (UTC)