Talk:Selfish (Dimitri Vegas & Like Mike and Era Istrefi song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:08, 9 June 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this article today! --K. Peake 07:08, 9 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * WP:OVERLINK of Dimitri Vegas & Like Mike under both songwriters and producers
 * The release sentence should be the third of the first para instead
 * "by Dimitri Vegas and Like Mike and wrote it with" → "by the duo, who served as songwriters alongside"
 * Remove the refrain part and release year of "Africa", as this is not notable info for the lead
 * "it is a dance, electro-pop" → "it is a dance-pop, electro-pop" since elsewise, it is not clear to readers that you mean the genre dance-pop
 * "atop the Billboard" → "atop the US Billboard"
 * "number 29 in Belgium" → "while peaking at number 29 in Belgium." removing the Austria position because this is too low to be notable here
 * Add a brief mention of what the video features Istrefi doing
 * "Prior to the single's release," → "Prior to its release,"
 * "performed at the Tomorrowland's" → "performed at Tomorrowland's"

Background and composition

 * "and wrote it with" → "and served as songwriters alongside"
 * Why is [3] invoked in the single release sentence as well as the remixes one?
 * "by the latter labels on" → "by the aforementioned labels on" because these two are the only labels mentioned
 * ""Selfish" is a tropical-described dance," → "Musically, "Selfish" is a tropical-described dance-pop,"
 * "Regarding the artist's collaboration," → "Regarding the collaboration with Istrefi," with the wikilink, also this should be the sentence directly after production/songwriting since it gives background on her appearance
 * ""BonBon" (2015) and knew" → "'BonBon' (2015) and knew"
 * "as well as Istrefi's vocal delivery." → "and Istrefi's vocal delivery."
 * ""[Selfish] is a radio friendly hit" also" → ""[Selfish is a] radio friendly hit", also"
 * "and similarly noted the song's potential" → "and similarly noted its potential"
 * "CelebMix' Jonathan Currinn commended" → "CelebMix's Jonathan Currinn commended"
 * Wikilink Miami Music Week
 * "peaked atop the Billboard" → "peaked atop the US Billboard"
 * "in Belgium, and number 690" → "in Belgium and number 690"

Promotion and music video

 * "music video, depicting Istrefi lying on a setting" → "music video, depicting Istrefi lying in a setting" on the img text with the wikilink
 * "premiered "Selfish" at the Tomorrowland's" → "premiered "Selfish" at Tomorrowland's"
 * "An accompanying music video for "Selfish"" → "A music video for "Selfish""
 * "notably features a series of scenes of Istrefi performing on" → "prominently features scenes of Istrefi performing in"

Track listing

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Only the ref col should be centered
 * Pipe Epic Amsterdam to Sony Music
 * Pipe Smash The House to Smash the House

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that was a very quick one! --K. Peake 08:08, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello once again, I've responded to all of your comments. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:45, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ time, I did some brief copy editing but solid job from you as always! --K. Peake 20:06, 10 June 2022 (UTC)