Talk:Semhar Araia

Lead
Could someone explain what "DAWN" stands for. I suggest updating the second paragraph as such: ". She is the founder and Executive Director of Diaspora African Women's Network (DAWN), a US based non-governmental organization that works to promote African diaspora women in leadership and in African affairs . SamuelN77 (talk) 22:18, 16 October 2014 (UTC)
 * What DAWN is is explained in the body. I've spelled out the acronym in the lede. Middayexpress (talk) 22:35, 16 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking care of that! Until DAWN gets honored with its own Wikipedia page, I still think some explanation of what DAWN is would be helpful in the lede, but you are right it is described in the content.SamuelN77 (talk) 01:15, 17 October 2014 (UTC)
 * No prob. Middayexpress (talk) 16:29, 17 October 2014 (UTC)

Career
I suggest adding this details (in place of the second paragraph's first sentence) to Araia's work on Eritrea-Ethiopia peace process:

"Araia worked as an attorney for the Eritrean Claims Commission, which was part of the peace process following the Comprehensive Peace Agreement between the governments of Eritrea and Ethiopia after the Eritrean-Ethiopian War." SamuelN77 (talk) 00:17, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
 * ✅ Middayexpress (talk) 16:09, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Perfect!SamuelN77 (talk) 21:13, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
 * May be a minor detail (but I think is an important information since I was initially confused myself): "attorney for the Eritrea-Ethiopia Claims Commission" potentially imply employment by the Commission, i.e. The Permanent Court of Arbitration at The Hague. I think that statement would be more accurate if it was amended as: "attorney for Eritrea's claims...". Here are some documents from the PCA database in support of my suggested change: In addition to citation, mentioned above,  SamuelN77 (talk) 22:28, 19 October 2014 (UTC)