Talk:Sentry Peak

Editing
In the plot description, i edited out clutter, but replacing "parody of" with "=". This is appropriate, because characters in this story are, for the most part, equivalents of real people. I also added intra-wiki links, such as to the article "William Rosecrans". I also made it so that the story was consistently described in present, not past, tense. Okay?--Solomonfromfinland (talk) 02:39, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

I believe it would be more appropriate if this was written without the "=". It's very difficult to read the article smoothly. However, the other changes are definitely good. BLITZKRIEGCAT (talk) 06:12, 25 February 2023 (UTC)