Talk:Seraph (The Matrix)

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BetacommandBot 22:04, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

The River...?
In the article, this line appears: "with Seraph attempting to rescue her, only to end up falling into the river." The phrase "The River" has absolutely no context in this situation, except that somehow its used as a dumping ground for physical code in a virtual system's representation of a physical system. Thats incredibly strange and, I think, deserving of at least a sidenote. I would add it myself, but the problem is Im utterly unsure what "The river" references. Chardansearavitriol (talk) 19:36, 30 January 2011 (UTC)

Most significant attack
In the Online Section of the article reads the following: His most significant target was Cryptos, leader of the Cypherite faction, in which he

unsuccessfully removed over a year's worth of reprogramming

Smplified this sentance reads, His target was Cryptos in which he unsuccessfully removed reprogramming. Without knowledge of the correct events of the movie it is impossible to determine what actually happened. Was the leader reprogrammed, was his intention to not remove over a years worth of reprogramming and thus leave the changed program or was his intention to remove less than a years worth of reprogramming.

Since Cryptos was a leader the phrase "in which he successfully" does not agree.

The verbal phrase "unsuccessfully removed" is not clear. A negative adverbial phrase used with a negative verb is unclear. As if to say I failed to discard more than I wanted to. A affirmative declarative statement would work better in this situation. At least clarification of the prepositional phrases that is the object of the removal attempt.

Thaddeus Ballantine (talk) 15:59, 18 November 2014 (UTC)