Talk:Serbian Patriotic Alliance/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk · contribs) 19:17, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Looks like this article was nominated almost 2 months ago. I'll be reviewing it over the next several days. Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk) 19:17, 6 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The article is in good shape, and unlike many Balkan GA nominees, the spelling and grammar are almost completely on-point, which is commendable. I just have a few comments:


 * Try instead:
 * ✅ Changed the wording. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:26, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * There should be a comma after 2018 Belgrade election. It should also be clarified what Šapić's party (not list) was called.
 * ✅ Added a comma, changed from Šapić's list to civic group name. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:32, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Try:
 * ✅ Changed. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:33, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * For the History sub-section headings, the years should be listed in parentheses after the title of each sub-section.
 * ✅ Changed. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:35, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * This should read:
 * ✅ Changed. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:38, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Again:
 * ✅ Changed. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:41, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Is the "if" a typo?
 * ✅ It was a typo, didn't notice that. Fixed. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:41, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Instead: List doesn't have the same meaning in English as it does in BCS.
 * ✅ Changed. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:43, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Try:
 * ✅ Implemented the changes. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:44, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Try: Also, which foreigners is this referring to?
 * ✅ Changed the wording, foreigners → European parliament representatives --Vacant0 (talk) 16:48, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Try:
 * ✅ Added "had". --Vacant0 (talk) 16:49, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Otherwise, this article is in decent shape, and I'd be happy to promote it to GA. Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk) 16:08, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * I've implemented the changes that you've suggested during the review. --Vacant0 (talk) 16:49, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * OK, looks good! Passed. Amanuensis Balkanicus (talk) 16:57, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks!! --Vacant0 (talk) 16:58, 12 July 2021 (UTC)