Talk:Serving His Children

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Remark: The Articles focuses in its current state too much on the Founder of the organization.CommanderWaterford (talk) 20:20, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
 * How would you suggest it be improved? The available literature discusses almost exclusively her and the allegations levelled, as she was the one implicated in the lawsuit.DMT biscuit (talk) 21:15, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi DMT biscuit, in general as I stated in the Edit Comment I think it is too much focused on the person Bach. It should be an article about the organization itself not just only about its founder. CommanderWaterford (talk) 16:20, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Understood . I'll try to see that the focus is diverted. Forewarning, I'll likely contact you again for your assessment. DMT biscuit (talk) 16:26, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
 * It seems to me this page should be titled "Renee Bach" instead, as the organization itself is not notable beyond her actions. Does coverage of the organization exist unrelated to her? The sources I read are all about her. Apathyash (talk) 18:30, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I'm open to either option. DMT biscuit (talk) 19:19, 19 March 2021 (UTC)