Talk:Seton Hall University/to do

Link diocesan in the lead? Second paragraph, the link with "top" doesn't lead to a section, only a redirect. "…that open doors…" sounds a bit POV. If it's taken from the reference, put it in quotes. I think the second half of the first paragraph and the second paragraph of "Early history" need a reference. If they're covered by ref 6, just duplicate it at the ends of the paragraphs. "…and began to enroll more and more students each year." is redundant and can be taken out. Why are the fires "strange"? Take the word out. "In the 20th century…" is redundant because the exact year "…as well as several dormitory…" change to "…and several dormitory…" "Spanish-American" should be "Spanish–American"; note the dash "Perhaps one of the most pivotal events…" is POV and unprofessional. I'm going to stop here. I suggest withdrawal and peer review/independent copy-edit. There are a few POV phrases (such as outlined above) and the prose needs smoothing out. A few ref formatting things, though: Mm40 (talk) 01:40, 24 October 2009 (UTC) Some publishers are linked while others aren't; make this consistent. Refs 1 and 3 say "US News and World Report" differently; one uses "and", the other uses an ampersand. The section name should be "References", not "Note and references". Refs 14 and 15 need formatting. For ref 23, make the access date format consistent with the rest. In ref 26, what does "mimeo" mean? Ref 29, a Myspace page, definitely isn't reliable. For ref 30, the publisher is the Big East, not the University. In ref 31, per the MoS, BIG EAST shouldn't be in ALL-CAPS even if it is on the page. I don't believe refs 38, 42, and 53 (NNDB) are reliable. Yahoo! Sports (refs 49 and 50) can surely be replaced with higher-quality sources. Ref 56 only leads to the website, not the article being referenced. Ref 57 is a self-published source, not reliable. Ref 61 needs a publisher. answers.com (ref 63) isn't reliable. Remove the NCAA template in the "External links" section; it doesn't mention SHU and is a bit redundant to the Big East one. Mm40 (talk) 01:40, 24 October 2009 (UTC)
 * source, source, source
 * Expand student life section, preferably with pictures
 * Expand intro in academics section